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Developmental Edit

Big-picture feedback on structure, pacing, character, and stakes.

Best for: Completed drafts ready for deep revision.

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Manuscript Critique

High-level diagnosis and revision roadmap.

Best for: Early to mid-revision drafts.

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Submission Package

Query, synopsis, and first pages.

Best for: Authors preparing to query.

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Manuscript Read

Reader-response feedback on what’s landing and what’s not.

Best for: Pre-revision gut checks.

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Line Editing

Sentence-level polish while preserving your voice.

Best for: Near-final drafts.

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Plot Analysis

Structural feedback on story beats and pacing.

Best for: Writers stuck on plot.

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Want a custom package?

Many clients combine services, including:

  • Developmental edit + line edit
  • Two-pass developmental editing
  • Plot analysis before a full dev edit

I’m happy to recommend a tailored approach based on your manuscript and goals.

Ready for thoughtful, craft-focused feedback?

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