Developmental Editing for Fiction Writers
Authors with a completed draft who want deep, craft-focused feedback on structure, pacing, character, and stakes.
What’s Included
Developmental editing involves in-depth feedback on the storytelling elements, such as character arcs, action, dialogue, description, exposition, pacing, and emotional connection.
With a developmental edit, notes will be made on specific actions that should be executed to strengthen your manuscript. You will receive an annotated copy of your manuscript in tandem with a comprehensive edit letter.
- Pre-read phone call to discuss expectations plus a 1,000 word sample.
- Full read of your manuscript
- Inline comments, questions, and reactions
- In-depth editorial letter
- 60-minute call (Zoom or audio) to discuss your story, the editorial letter, and brainstorm
Pricing
$0.03/word
- i.e. 100,000 words equals $3,000
Process
- Discovery call
- Contract + deposit
- Edit period
- Delivery + 60-minute call
How It Helps
- Strengthens story architecture
- Clarifies character motivations
- Improves pacing and tension
- Aligns genre expectations
Turnaround Time
Standard turnaround for a developmental edit is 4–6 weeks, depending on word count and scheduling.
Express Option
Need feedback faster? I offer a limited number of Express Developmental Edits each month.
- Turnaround: 14 days
- Rush fee: +$750
- Subject to availability
Express projects are prioritized and may require schedule adjustments.
What is developmental editing?
Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of your manuscript, including structure, pacing, character arcs, stakes, and overall cohesion. It’s about strengthening the story as a whole rather than fixing sentences.
What's included in developmental editing?
A developmental edit includes detailed in-line comments throughout your manuscript and a comprehensive editorial letter outlining strengths, patterns, and clear revision recommendations.
Will you rewrite my manuscript?
No. I don’t rewrite your work. My feedback highlights where and why changes may be needed and offers options for revision while preserving your voice and intent.
Is developmental editing the right choice for my project?
Developmental editing is best if you’re still shaping the story—whether that means clarifying plot, strengthening characters, improving pacing, or resolving structural issues. If you’re mostly concerned with sentence-level polish, line editing may be a better fit.
Can you help if my manuscript is very long or needs cutting?
Yes. I frequently work with manuscripts that need significant tightening. Developmental editing is ideal for identifying where cuts can happen without losing emotional or narrative impact.
Do you work with sensitive or dark material?
Yes. I’m comfortable editing projects that include trauma, violence, or emotionally heavy themes and approach this material thoughtfully and professionally.
How long does a developmental edit take?
Turnaround depends on manuscript length and current availability, but most developmental edits take 4–6 weeks. Express options may be available for an additional fee.
Can I ask questions after I receive my edit?
Yes. All developmental edits include the option for a follow-up conversation to clarify feedback and talk through revision priorities.
Do you offer second-pass developmental edits?
Yes. After you revise, I offer focused second-pass developmental edits at a reduced rate to assess changes and fine-tune structure and pacing.
What format do you work in?
I work in Microsoft Word using Track Changes and comments to keep feedback clear and easy to follow.
Can we talk before I book?
Absolutely. I’m happy to schedule a discovery call to discuss your manuscript, goals, and whether developmental editing is the right fit.
Combine Services
Combine two or more services to give your manuscript the attention it deserves. And there’s a discount when you bundle services.
Popular Bundles
Developmental Edit + Line Edit
→ Big-picture + sentence-level polish
Two-pass Developmental Edit
→ One structural pass +second refinement pass
Plot Analysis → Dev Edit
→ Fix structure first + deep craft
How bundling works
- Discounted add-on services
- Custom timeline
- Tailored scope