Services

Developmental Edit
Big-picture feedback on structure, pacing, character, and stakes.
Best for: Completed drafts ready for deep revision.

Manuscript Critique
High-level diagnosis and revision roadmap.
Best for: Early to mid-revision drafts.

Submission Package
Query, synopsis, and first pages.
Best for: Authors preparing to query.

Manuscript Read
Reader-response feedback on what’s landing and what’s not.
Best for: Pre-revision gut checks.

Line Editing
Sentence-level polish while preserving your voice.
Best for: Near-final drafts.

Plot Analysis
Structural feedback on story beats and pacing.
Best for: Writers stuck on plot.
Want a custom package?
Many clients combine services, including:
- Developmental edit + line edit
- Two-pass developmental editing
- Plot analysis before a full dev edit
I’m happy to recommend a tailored approach based on your manuscript and goals.
Ready for thoughtful, craft-focused feedback?
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